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Hard to believe that on this day 10 long years ago, The Blackthornes made its debut on the web.   That first episode, aptly titled “The Next Mrs. Blackthorne”, was a long time in coming.  I wrote the entire first season (twenty-three 6k word episodes) in the spring of 2004 while recovering from a motocross injury that left me on crutches for three months. Writing wasn’t new for me. It, along with politics and dirt bikes, were my lifeblood, and to some degree still are.  The earliest piece of fiction I can remember writing was a Star Wars fanfic that took place after Return of the Jedi but was essentially a scene for scene copy of the film.  Later there was a spiral-bound collaborative effort that was passed around the halls of Van Nuys High School for an entire semester, and was some of the rawest, raunchiest, perverse “erotica’ to spill from a tenth graders mind.

But things got serious when I wrote a forty-some episode series called The Young At Heart and was a cross between Dynasty, All My Children, and some hijinks that went on one year in school.  Then came a series called Moonshadows that lasted several seasons and that I tried to ressurect years later as one of many attempts at a spin off of The Blackthornes.

Finally, that spring of 2004, I was glued to SoapNet for weeks when I came up with the idea for The Blckthornes. It was basically Dynasty set in Hollywood.  For a while, I posted it on a Dynasty fan website as a spin-off fanfic, but eventually eliminated any reference to its inspiration series.  It wasn’t until over a year later that a friend helped me get a website going and directed me to Epiguide.  By early December of 2005 I had a very crude website built and posted a new episode every week.  Nobody read.  I can’t really blame them.  Over the years, so many webseries have come and gone that it’s difficult to allow yourself to make an effort to get into one if it’s just going to disappear in a few episodes.  Still, I remained resilient.  After a short hiatus following season one, I went full steam ahead into season 2 and posted every week.  Still, no one read.

Finally, when season three launched in January of 2007, I started getting some recognition from other webseries writers.  I don’t know if it was because I’d broken through the barrier so many new series find themselves up against as a “newbie” or that I shed some of my bad writing habits from earlier episodes and started writing more outside-the-box material.  Either way, I remember that being a very productive, fertile time in the community.   The rest, as they say, is history.  After six seasons The Blackthornes is an accomplishment that I’m very proud of, and defined a decade of my life.  Will I ever go back?  The truth is I don’t know.  But of course I never say never, and I love my characters like they were real people.  If I do revisit that world, it would have to be done in a new and different way.  For now, there’s a permanent timeslot in cyberspace for The Blackthornes.  I love nothing more than to tune in to a random episode and remember what was going on in my life when I wrote it.  It’s those memories that I wrap myself in when the world gets cold and lonely.

Until next time.

AE

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Exeunt

I promised myself I wouldn’t cry!  :-)   I just finished writing the final scene of the final episode.  After two weeks of changing this and moving that around, I found that the end result wasn’t much different than when it started.  To me, that usually means it was pretty set in stone to begin with.  I wanted this episode to be about closure for a lot of characters, or about potential-closure.  I wanted there to be enough life-changing developments that it warrants this being the last episode, but nothing too dire in nature.  There’s been plenty of that already.  For anyone who may wish they’d have gotten more of a “final scene feeling” from any of the characters, I could have written a hundred pages of wrap-up for these people and it still wouldn’t have been enough, so I eventually had to cut it off somewhere.  I wanted the finale to have the sense that life goes on.  The first part of the finale was about questions answered, mysteries solved, etc, and this was the wrapup.

To me, the final scene in the series was always written in the cards.  Or in my story bible, to be more literal.  James and Brooke were the foundation of the series in the beginning, and they came close to reuniting a few times.  It only makes sense that the end would leave the reader wondering if they do get back together.  Things always end as they started, at least in my mind.  That’s why the wedding in this episode, followed by the screening of the new movie, were mirrors of the first episodes.

For now, I’m going to take a break, read a lot, work on some miscellaneous writing projects, and then probably miss the interaction and the friendship I share with other producers about our series, and start planning out a new one.  I have no idea how I could top The Blackthornes, and I don’t just want to throw down a story about the “intertwining residents of a small town filled with secrets” because that’s been done to death.  :-)   If I told you some of the ideas I have for webseries, you would never believe it in a million years. Only when I can combine all those ideas into one sprawling, epic story will I do it.

Then there is the issue of sixty-some episodes I have already written for a series I wrote prior to The Blackthornes called Moonshadows (not connected to the resort of the same name).  I uploaded the first episode onto my site a few years ago, where at the time I considered touting is as a spin-off.  Moonshadows can only be described as how Knots Landing was to Dallas.  Smaller scale, more suburban, more day-to-day activities mixed in with the intrigue.  Shady politics and general business shenanegans are featured heavily in the series, and it’s definitely more of a male-dominated series than The Blackthornes.  I’m not sure how or if I could release the series because at this point I’ve used some of the storylines, or parts of the storylines, in The Blackthornes.  It may just have to stay on the shelf indefinitely.

The Blackthornes will stay on the web in its current home.  I’ll probably change the url at some point when I do a new series, but I’ll update everyone when that happens.  If I get desperate for a project, I’ll probably do some clean-up of the site at some point. Updating bios and that sort of maintenance-type stuff.

At the risk of sounding cheesy, I did want to thank my faithful readers for offering your support and feedback over the years.  It made The Blackthornes so much fun to write, especially when I started listening to readers’ opinions.  :-)   Looking forward to many more years of reading your work and enjoying the ride!

xoxoxo

AE

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“And Now to Find out Who the Killer Really Is….”

I’ve already mentioned my self loathing for reneging on my promise of “one more episode”, only to surprise announce there would actually be TWO more (bad planning on my part), but I actually think it worked out well this way.   The two parts of the finale are so vastly different in tone that releasing them together as one episode would have just been weird.  In their current form, part 1 is the classic OTT schtick that the series I suppose is known for.  Part 2 will be more of an emotional journey mixed with some expected intrigue.  This is how I usually pattern my season finales anyway, so I don’t know why I didn’t plan it this way anyway.  Needless to say, if you think everything happened in this first part, it didn’t.  There’s plenty more to come.  AND enough time to give the core characters the proper send off.  

Disclaimer:  (I hate having to do these).  The scenes that bookend the episode aren’t meant to be taken too literally.  There are no hidden secrets or easter eggs contained in them.  They’re more or less a indication of a possible scenario at one of Jonas Lamont’s industry parties.   They aren’t necessary to understand the story.  

The reveal as <spoiler> as the killer was important to me because I didn’t want it to be a new character like Denise or Keaton, but rather one that has been around since the beginning.  <spoiler> has actually been around since the first episode.  I was glad that I could utilize a character with so much history as the villain in the final storyline.

I’ll have more to say next week.  Back to editing this bitch.

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The Shakespearean Candidate

This episode undoubtedly had more climaxing stories than any other episode before it.  I really struggled over where to cut this episode off.  First, I had Michael’s kidnapping climax, Alex and Keaton’s climax, and the killer being revealed all at the end.  In rewrites, however, I put the latter off till the beginning of the next one.  The first scene will be very much what one would expect from me, I think.  It isn’t clear where or when the action is taking place, a gimmick I do in the premiere of every season.    

But I’m getting ahead of myself.  All That Glitters puts the cogs in motion for the finale.  Miranda decides to give Kelly a break and help her reconnect with her long-lost father.  She figures she’s got the happy ending she’s always wanted, so why shouldn’t everybody?  Even a skank like Kelly.  And I couldn’t let the series end with Miranda still living in her father’s house.  Of all the people who have lived there over the years, she’s the one who has never left.  It’s time for her to grow up, I decided, thus Eddie’s surprise purchase of their town home.  And what of Eddie’s plans to adopt Tiger as his own?  Someone may have something to say about that.  Tune in next time to find out.  :-)  

Jackie’s return was inevitable.  The surprise (hopefully) was that it doesn’t have anything to do with what one would expect (her son David’s surgery, her husband Nathan’s life being on the line, or the plentitude of secrets her father Jonas implemented before he died).  No, this is Jackie.  She comes back when an opportunity for massive wealth presents itself.  Obviously she could be in some trouble.  Does anyone think she won’t wiggle her way out of it?

I’m not sure how apparent is was to readers that Keaton was Alex’s son.  Obviously half way through this episode I more or less spelled it out.  This was a setup I’ve had in motion for years (literally).   I always had the idea that Alex had a third child.  She went as far as “slipping up” here and there throughout the course of the series and saying “my three children”.  Also, back in the season 4 finale, when she accidentally took too many pills and fell unconscious in her apartment, she was holding a photograph of a baby.  I never explained this.  Shortly after that, she decided it would be a good idea to adopt a baby (her way of making things right with the baby she gave up).  So needless to say, this was probably the longest-running storyline in the series.  I hoped to confuse (distract is a better word) the reader by insinuating Keaton was Marilee’s son, or Nathan’s son.  I’m not sure if it worked.  I know I’ve had a tendency in the past to make things a little too obvious, then when the conclusion happens, the reader is like “duh”.  LOL.   At any rate, I’m glad Alex’s secret child has finally been revealed.  The question now is, “is he a killer?” 

I still have a few scenes to write and some tweaking to do for the finale, so we’ll see how it pans out in the end.  Expect a slightly longer final episode, which I usually try not to do because I struggle with keeping them under 30 pages at it is.  But for the last one I’m going to not limit myself.  If it winds up five extra pages, I won’t beat myself up.  Just a warning to all – settle in for that longer than usual read!

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From the Stars

Back in season 5, I started a mini arc involving Michael and his imaginary friend “Adam”.  Originally, I thought of doing a quasi-paranormal storyline that tied in with Miranda and her pregnancy (she was Michael’s primary caregiver during this time as Brooke was off being kidnapped in the jungles of Mexico).  It would eventually come out to have a reasonable explanation, obviously, as The Blackthornes has never had a supernatural element to it.  Anyway, I never got around to really getting this storyline off the ground.  Ethan came back in the finale and I just chalked the Adam thing up to a way of Michael coping with his father’s absence.  

Cut to my planning stages of season 6 where I wrote the second episode titled “From the Stars”, which was one giant Ethan flashback chronicling his life in the year and a half he’d been gone.  The title of that episode was never fully explained, other than a few hints I dropped about Emmett, the man who rescued Ethan from the earthquake, having some kind of mysterious connection to NASA.  He loaded his apocalypic bunker with NASA supplies and had weird notebooks full of complicated equations, prompting Ethan to question this, but never getting an answer.  Well, here we finally have the explanation.  Or you will by the next episode, anyway.  :-)   At the time I thought “wouldn’t it be cool if this guy came back later in the season to exact his revenge?  And wouldn’t it be cooler if “Adam” popped up again, and everyone thought Michael was projecting about his parents broken marraige, but this time it was a real person?   I’m glad to have made something out of that storyline from season five, and in a way that makes sense.  

What was even more perfect was that – without my even trying – readers seemed to think “Adam” would be connected to the storyline of The Benefactor.  I guess that’s just because of my weird infatuation with space and stars this year.   Purely coincidental. 

Not so coincidental was my placing that phrase “From the Stars” in as many episodes as I could.  The most glaring, to me, was in “Nobody Lost, Nobody Found” (the episode after Benji kills Sierra).  The scene opened with the sentence: “Glimmering reflections of light from the stars flickered across her wide open eyes that still stared up at the night sky.”  Doesn’t have anything to do with Adam or that storyline, of course.  Just another obscure reference I drop in that usually only makes sense to me. 

Trivia:  “From the Stars” is the name of a song by White Lies about a disaffected man who returns home to his father’s funeral and gets drunk in the penthouse of a hotel while brooding over their relationship and the affect the recession has had on his home town.  It sounds very Blackthornes flip-side to me.  

I really enjoyed writing this episode.  It was also very hard because for the first time I can really envision the end of the series and I can feel the tone of it.   I have the bones for the last two episodes done, but as usual they need a lot of tweaking.  I’ll probably be tweaking until the minute before the very last episode gets posted.

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Through the Jungle and Through the Night

Alright, so here we are coming down to the wire.  Hopefully you should be seeing a climax of sorts happening by this episode.  I have 3 episodes left and a cluster of scenes that make them up.  I knew I’d need to do some juggling to get the timing right on a lot of things so that’s why I planned it this way.  Ex: a scene I wrote for the finale is now being moved to next week’s episode.  It’s tricky.  The “killer” storyline is barreling to its conclusion, Eddie and Miranda are back on the mend, Brooke is about to learn that Kyle is more or less untrustworthy (whether warranted or not), and several key characters are set to make their return.  This week was Heather, and maybe Philip.  Although Philip was just a device I used to have someone tell Brooke the obvious – that her man juggling is getting ridiculous.  I could have handled this with a different character, but in the spirit of continuity, I decided on bringing him back for an episode. 

I’m enjoying these last few episodes because I’ve gotten to do some scenes I’ve always wanted to do.  The one with Lola being chased in the theatre was one of them.  It’s been an idea I’ve had for a scene for a long, long time.  I don’t know why.  I just like the dramatic, theatrical, symbolic feel of it.  Believe it or not, it was a scene that inspired the series.  Weird?  I know.   Have you noticed the “space” theme in this season?   Another obscure bunch of references I’ve wanted to do for a while.  Some of that should make more sense in the next episode. 

Also, bringing back some past characters has been fun.  Heather, Philip, and next week Winter Austen.  Plus I get to squeeze a few more scenes out of old standby peripheral characters like Marilee, and some with Kenny coming up soon.  

Finale in a month from today!  Heading home in a few days to finish it.  I hope everyone likes it as much as I’ve enjoyed writing it. 

Thanks for your support.

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No Stone Unturned

Pretty straightforward episode I suppose.  It wound up having a little bit of an ominous feel, which was appropriate for the approaching holiday.  There’s lots of things to touch on right now and some more set up to do, which was largely what this episode was all about.  People have asked me “when are things going to start winding down?” Well, the truth is, they are winding down.  It just may not be especially visible to the reader.  Characters are having epiphany’s right and left, reflecting on their pasts and the things that make them who they are.  These are the things that I feel are important to closing down a series.   Of course there will be conclusions, revelations, reunions, and the like, as to be expected.  I think the finale will be satisfying to people who are familiar with the series.  But also, with a series that moves at the pace that The Blackthornes does, I can’t exactly start having people say their goodbye’s when there are still 4 episodes left! The action will take us through to the first part of the finale, which is going to be lots of fun to write.  I’m starting on it next week, actually.  Did I mention that?

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Mr. Brightside

So when I outlined this episode, I was high.  When I went to write it, I was not.  I wrote all the Moonshadows and serial killer scenes first and left the scenes with Brett till the end, thinking they would be a breeze.  Originally, I intended 3/4 of the episode to center on this story, drawing in a lot more past characters than I wound up using.  When I started writing those scenes, however, none of my outline made sense!  So in the end, I only used a few of those past characters, and in just a couple of scenes.    It was really disappointing that this “great idea” I had wound up being too ridiculous for words.  So I altered it quite a bit and I think what I was left with turned out okay.  Originally, there was a whole sub plot about Magnum and his parents.  It was basically a continuation of the story I did in early season 5 where Quinn faked Magnum’s disapperance so Eddie would come in and investigate.  Quinn just wanted to get close to Eddie, hoping he would fall for her and solve their family’s money problems.  Quinn and Magnum’s father had left their mother, leaving them broke.  In this follow-up to that, it was going to be revealed that their father left because their mother was having an affair with Van.  Thus the bigger motivation for Magnum to turn Van in to the police.  Instead, I took care of all that story in one or two sentences of exposition. 

In this episode, two characters that I’ve always envisioned as so minor that I never even bothered to make bios for, are featured fairly heavily.  Van Edgewater, who first appeared in episode 75 as a friend of Benji and Blake’s, has popped up now and then over the last three seasons, usually in support of Benji’s hijinks.  It’s a little late to give him a full fledged bio now, but I always envisioned him as the guy who played the Winklevoss twins in The Social Network

Next, his father, Deacon, has never really “appeared” on screen until the last episode.  His name has been dropped numerous times since the beginning of the series, though, as the CEO of Double Strike Studios, who produced some of Alex’s early films as noted in her StarLog page.  This is one of several characters that came about from my brainstorming names to plug into those StarLog pages (that haven’t been updated in forever, btw), without intentions of ever using them for actual story purposes.  (Others were Frank Dunning, Eric Autumn, Elana Hendricks, and Cassidy Solomon – who are coincidentally now all dead – LOL).  But here he is, making a real life appearance and a mini storyline of his own. 

While this little adventure of Brett’s is technically an extended way of solving his legal troubles with The Benefactor, it also has a couple of other intentions, which will be revealed in the coming episodes, and has a lot to do with how Brett’s character ends up in the series. 

I wanted to remind readers of Brett’s origins as an opportunistic con man, and as far as he’s come in six years, he’s still relatively the same.  I’ve said before that Brett is my favorite character in the series.  He’s really the one who was the most dispensible.  He has no real ties to anyone in the series (except for now that he has a daughter with Heather), so I always had to find ways to keep him around.  I like him because on the surface he’s this well-groomed, blue-eyed, blond-haired All American boy next door who looks like he could be straight from the Ivy League.  Inside, however, he’s devious.  But more than that, there’s a reason for his deviousness.  He has a daughter now whom he must provide for.  I did a flashback years ago that showed him at home with his father and his step mother and they treated him like shit.  He was young but had to leave home at an early age, resulting in him conning people to survive.  I like how far he’s come.  He took advantage of some people, but everything he has he’s earned.  He’s probably the most driven character in the series, and for the right reasons.  I’ll probably miss him the most.  One of my ideas for a new web series at one time was a spinoff featuring Brett working as a producer in the porn industry.  I don’t think that will ever happen, but I would have loved to continue writing this character. 

Lots of stuff to cover in the last 5 episodes!  But not so much that it will feel rushed or too bogged down.  I’m determined to have enough flexibility to really give everyone an appropriate send off rather than a rushed ending.   Back to writing!

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Damnit, Jim!

For as many Scream references as I’ve made over the years in The Blackthornes, I couldn’t not drop a Scream-esqe murder sequence at some point!  And no, the killer is not going to go around in a cape and hood all the time.  This was just a fun way to tie it into the sci-fi convention. Questicon was something I’ve always wanted to do, but never seemed like a good time.  It’s pretty stripped down here and doesn’t get a lot of focus, but it amuses me that there’s this sci-fi convention going on at the same time as all these other dramatic moments.  The lawsuit against Sunset Studios, Jack being murdered, and Moonshadows being shut down all at once.  Yikes!~ This could have easily been a mid-season finale.  Only it’s not.  :)   The scene with Q&A from the audience during Nathan’s speech was based on a hilarious SNL skit I saw from an old episode with William Shatner attending a Star Trek convention.   It made me laugh so I wanted to reference it. 

Mason’s plan, revealed in this episode, is the epicenter of events that will lead up to the finale, so I’m excited. 

With Moonshadows being closed down, I’m left without a centralized meeting place.  This is something I’ve always included in the series because it’s a staple for soaps.  It’s always a fictional place that ties characters into one setting on a regular basis.  In season 1 it was Renee’s generic “Beach Club”, in seasons 2 through 4, it was Hotel Terranova, and in 5 and 6 it was Moonshadows. 

Episodes will be released every 10 days from now through December 10th.  I’ve written ahead quite a bit these past two weeks, so I’ll have a bit of cushion.  At this rate, I should be done writing in about a month, and on to some other projects, including writing a script for an episode of a webseries filmed and produced here in Nebraska.

Next episode on the 18th!

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A Tale of Three Cities

A challenge to get this one polished enough to post.  I was dealing with 3 time zones, one being clear across the world.  Without putting in a bunch of unnecessary scenes to balance things out, it took a lot of shuffling of scenes.  

I really wanted to revisit the origins of the series with James and his sister Georgie, and the whole Will Thomerson/Ethan angle, so I was glad I could do that here.  Not a huge story mover, but it’s a beat that I wanted to hit before signing off.   Plus it let me put James, Alex and Brooke in scenes together which they aren’t very often these days.  It harkens back to the beginning. 

The scene where Nathan and Victor get shot at very nearly went a different route.  I changed it at the last minute because I thought it was TOOO over the top even for The Blackthornes.   I won’t say how it was originally going to play out because I might still use it in the next few episodes.  I can’t even give an adquate hint as to what it was going to be without giving it away, but something about it seemed very right to me.   So who knows….

Crossovers material pretty much ends after this episode.  You have to read the next Nightingales to see the conclusion.   There’s a few clean up scenes in the next Blackthornes, and more fallout from Miranda being a lady pimp and disposing of Hugh’s body, but other than that it’s wrapped for me.  I’m determined to turn the whole debacle into something that Miranda can grow from, however, so I have my work cut out for me there.

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